3 pages analysed for AI-writing patterns.
Scored 50/100 across 3 pages. The writing has some shape but several tells per page (11 flagged) suggest AI assistance without an editor's pass. Cleanup is straightforward, not a rewrite.
01/sydney/cafes/how-bourke-street-bakery-grew-corner-store-sydney-institution954 words · 3 em dashes · 1 tell45
- NOT JUST X, BUT Y
“expanded not only in Surry Hills, but across the entire city”
A not-only/but parallel, though here it reads as natural magazine prose rather than LLM scaffolding.
02/adelaide/things-to-do/the-ultimate-guide-to-the-royal-adelaide-show-2025-what-to-eat-see-do1,448 words · 14 em dashes · 6 tells60
- EM DASH
“It is that time of year — The Royal Adelaide Show is back and bigger than ever!”
Em dash as clause separator in the opening line where a period or comma would be more natural.
- EM DASH
“to the Show — perfect for when you want something hearty without the guilt”
Mid-sentence em dash joining two clauses; a period would read cleaner.
- EM DASH
“zesty citrus — the perfect refresher between bites”
Em dash used as a clause bridge; lifestyle editors typically cut these in final pass.
- STOCK PHRASE
“back and bigger than ever! Think heart-racing rides, show-stopping entertainment, drool-worthy eats”
'Bigger than ever' + 'Think [list]' opener is a stock lifestyle-copy formula that LLMs reach for reflexively.
- STOCK PHRASE
“this guide has everything you need for an unforgettable day out. Let the fun begin!”
'Everything you need' + 'unforgettable' + exclamation closer is boilerplate event-guide phrasing.
- OTHER
“it's an unmissable, authentic Show experience”
Stacked empty adjectives ('unmissable, authentic') doing no descriptive work — filler line a human editor would tighten or cut.
03/sydney/things-to-do/the-sxsw-events-to-have-on-your-radar1,686 words · 4 em dashes · 4 tells45
- STOCK PHRASE
“celebrates the intersection of technology, film, music and culture”
"Intersection of" is a top-10 LLM connector phrase; it appears twice in this article, suggesting AI-polished copy rather than original editorial.
- STOCK PHRASE
“fascinated by the intersection of music, storytelling, and staying grounded through success”
Second use of "intersection of" plus "fascinated by" — both are high-frequency LLM filler words rarely chosen by human editors.
- NOT JUST X, BUT Y
“the best leaders aren't those with all the answers, but those willing to question their own thinking”
Classic not-X-but-Y scaffold that LLMs use to inject false depth into a summary sentence.
- STOCK PHRASE
“In this thought-provoking session, she explores the power of strategic uncertainty”
"Thought-provoking" is used twice across event blurbs — stock LLM/PR descriptor that a human editor would vary or cut on the second use.